Blog 16: Type CATW practice 3

    In the passage "How to Do One Thing at a Time" from Women's health Magazine, the author presents the harmful effects of multi-tasking on humain beings.  He explains that multi-tasking including the ones that aren't considered dangerous, hurts human beings and causes us to be less productive.  The author states, nevertheless, that it is possible to do multi-tasking and remain safe by practicing our ability to concentrate

   As far as I am concerned, the idea"we are less efficient after we shut down e-mails and turned off our phones" is the most believable because we are not focused on any of the tasks we are doing to make the best out of it.  As a student, I always try to do many task at the same time, but I always end up making a mess of all of it because I am not focused  In my previous English session on Thursday, I was fixing the table and trying to make a summary for a movie we watchedin class.  As a result, I didn't finish my assignment on time because I couldn't focus

    We are also less efficient when we are doing things simultaneously because when we must accomplish tasks in a given amount of time we don't make a good usage of the time we have, and we always finish late or we just don't finish.  Last sunday, I tried to finish an assignment for my french class in one hour then go to work just that, but the visit of a couple of my friends disturbed me because we started talking  I ended up with an assignment not done and I got late for work  This example illustratre perfectly how multi-tasking can cause us to be less efficient when we are trying to finish things on time

   Yet we all know that multi-tasking can be dangerous, people still manage to do many things at the same time.  We should be more careful because multi-tasking can be as deadly as a disease.

Blog 14:" Learning From Another ENG 099"

In my opinion, the best post is post 3 because,unlike the others, it has a significant idea, which is well developped and supported by a specific example. I like the example; it is specific and helps understand what is the main point it talks about. Though I thing it is the best post, I will say it needs works on the summary because it is too long and the organisation is not fine.

RANKING:
1.Post 3
2.Post 1
3.Post 2

Blog 12: Consequentialism

      In the movie "Gone Baby Gone", we are invited to join the quest of Patrick, a detective, who is hired to bring back a daughter of an addicted women who has been kidnapped.  Patrick along with Angie, his girlfriend, are looking for Amanda, who is kidnapped in misterious conditions in her mother's house in Boston.  With helps from his friends in the street, Patrick finds proofs that could lead him to Amanda; however, Amanda's death is announced after Patrick attempts to bring her back.  One year later, Patrick finds Amanda in the Police captain's house, who explained to Patrick that it was a story entirely made up by Amanda's uncle, Lionel, to provide Amanda with a better life away from her addicted mother, but Patrick brought her back to her mother.

      In the movie, we are presented with two different sides, which go against each another as to their belief about Amanda life.  We have the consequentialists with the Police captain, Remi, Lionel and Angie that believe that Amanda should stay with the Police captain that will provide her with a better life. Therefore, it doesn't matter how immoral the kidnapping was, it is justified by the fact that she will have a better life. 

     On the other hand, we have the ethical absolutism with Patrick who brings back Amanda to his mother though Angie tell him she will leave him if he does so. What he did.  He also refused to kill anybody else even if he will face the same circumstances that made him kill a guy in the movie.

    As far as I am concerned, I believe that the movie supports the idea of leaving Amanda to the Police captain because at the end of movie a scene between presents Helene who leave Amanda to Patrick because she had a date and couldn't wait for Amanda's nanny, but the most relevant thing in this scene is that we can see that Amanda wasn't as happy as when she was with the captain.    

Blog11: CATW practice 2

        In "The Woman Who Died in the Waiting Room", Jeneen Interlandi explains that there is no place in hospitals for the mentally ill.  She presents the outrageous circumstances of Esmin Green's death, a disable, which she pointed out as unsurprising since most mental hospitals are closed.  Jensen supports that we should have a place in the society for disables.

         In the passage, I support the idea "Rather than lock them away in the cold, uncarring instutions, the thinking went, the mentally ill should be offered a place in society." because in psychiatric hospitals they often treat disables as people with no will instead of helping them get back on the right track.  I believe that keeping people in rooms with their legs and hands tied up, with no windows on the walls and a poor diet filled with pills can't help anybody feels better, but it will rather make them act crazier; this is the atmosphere in which most disables are kept.  For instance, last year, I visited a friend of mine in an hospital.  He wasn't in a mentally ill condition, but as I was walking to his room I stepped in a room filled with people that are mentally ill.  I wondered why they were kept in a room by themselves because I believe that if we want someone to well behave he should interact with people who behave correctly.  So why do they keep them by themselves.

        I also believe that people that are mentally should be offered a place in society because they may recover their sences if they are not kept motionless in rooms.  It feels good to see a disable well behave after his madness.  I experienced myself living with someone mentally ill.  It's really not an easy task to take care of them, but when they feel better it makes you happy.  My oncle, who was mentally ill  used to live in our house in Africa.  My parents refused to send him in an hospital because they believed that in an hospital he would be mistreated.  It was hard to take care of him, but when he started feeling better we were all happy.  Unfortunately, he died last year. I believe that if he was in an hospital, he would have died earlier.

        As Jeneen Interlandi presents, the places aimed for the mentally ill are drastically dimished, but we should strive to find them a place to be in the society.